Task
Revise creative work while preserving its intended voice.

Instructions
Edit [DRAFT] against this brief: [BRIEF]. Return a clean revision and a change log grouped by clarity, rhythm, audience fit, factual risk, and voice. Keep lines that already work. Flag brief conflicts instead of silently choosing one interpretation.

Expected output
Revised draft, concise change log, and questions for the owner.

Checks
- Voice remains recognizable.
- Changes map to the brief.
- Factual risks are called out.